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I Can Not Write You A Poem by =save-my-soul93:iconsave-my-soul93:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


I can not write you a poem
That will convey how much
Pain and sorrow I would have
If I were to lose you.

I can not write you a poem,
Telling you that you are
More to me than just a best friend.

I can not write a poem
To tell you how many tears
Would fall upon my face
If you were to leave me here.

I can not write you a poem
Because if you leave
It will mean nothing.

I can not write you a poem
Because it means nothing compared
to how much you mean to me.
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Author's Comments

...Suicide attempts don't just hurt you, they hurt the people who care about you more.

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~Padfoot-Pal Mar 27, 2009, 11:13:50 AM
Wow this is really moving. It's true suicide hurts more people than you think.

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My soul was removed to make room for all this sarcasm

I want to hurt you just to hear you scream my name.

I'm with the vampires that don't sparkle A.K.A REAL VAMPIRES
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=save-my-soul93 Mar 27, 2009, 11:15:24 AM
I'm glad you like it. It's about one of my best friends. And thanks for the favorite.

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There is no reason to life; there are only reasons to live.
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~Padfoot-Pal Mar 27, 2009, 11:35:25 AM
It's really good. I'm sorry your friend went through that. :( :hug:

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My soul was removed to make room for all this sarcasm

I want to hurt you just to hear you scream my name.

I'm with the vampires that don't sparkle A.K.A REAL VAMPIRES
:iconsave-my-soul93:
=save-my-soul93 Mar 27, 2009, 11:38:28 AM
Eh, it happens. She just.. she can't seem to see the good in life., I used to be in her postion so I understand it.

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There is no reason to life; there are only reasons to live.
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~Padfoot-Pal Mar 27, 2009, 12:38:26 PM
Awww I'm sorry. I hope you have seen the good in life now and I hope she finds it too. My friend has this really shitty home life and I fear she might be on that path. I really hope she doesn't go there.

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My soul was removed to make room for all this sarcasm

I want to hurt you just to hear you scream my name.

I'm with the vampires that don't sparkle A.K.A REAL VAMPIRES
:iconsave-my-soul93:
=save-my-soul93 Mar 27, 2009, 12:41:38 PM
It's really hard to escape the mindset of suicide and I hope your friend is alright. I've had several suicidal friends so I know how tough it is watching them go through that.

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There is no reason to life; there are only reasons to live.
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=3wyl Mar 27, 2009, 12:42:30 PM
The last stanza really concludes things. I like the tone and the... sadness in it.

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=save-my-soul93 Mar 27, 2009, 12:47:14 PM
Thanks.

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There is no reason to life; there are only reasons to live.
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~Padfoot-Pal Mar 27, 2009, 1:21:42 PM
Thanks. Man I'm sorry you've had to watch your friends go through that a lot. :hug:

--
My soul was removed to make room for all this sarcasm

I want to hurt you just to hear you scream my name.

I'm with the vampires that don't sparkle A.K.A REAL VAMPIRES
:iconsave-my-soul93:
=save-my-soul93 Mar 27, 2009, 1:25:45 PM
I got used to it (sadly) but it always hurts even if you are used to it.

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There is no reason to life; there are only reasons to live.
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